Why is it so hard to admit we've been wrong?
It's so hard to admit we've been wrong becouse we think that being wrong makes us a halfwit. This idea that making mistakes is bad is developed right from our childhood. Being wrong at school, for example, is immediately punished, whereas being right and not making any mistakes whatsoever is rewarded. We are taught to strive for perfection and growing up that's what we see when we think of an inteligent person, someone who's never been wrong. That's why it's so hard to admit to being wrong. It's becouse we've learnt that making mistakes is bad.
It's a bit too short.
OdpowiedzUsuńThe structure is really good - the topic sentence captures it all, then you explain what you mean and in the end you summarise it.
Pity your last two sentences aren't one - they would then make a much more sensible conclusion.